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~Kindle ♦ The Ultimate Submission ⚉ The Ultimate Submission is an erotic journey of discovery As Diego makes the tumultuous transition from youthful innocence to introspective maturity, he will question his definitions of sin and righteousness He will plumb the depths of sexual expression and learn to define for himself at what point fantasy ends and depravity begins and he will ultimately discover the healing power of loveAbove all, Diego will come to understand that the truth does not always set you freeOut of Print edition 1.5 actually and that only for the first half of the first chapter.This started out quite interesting, and I certainly would have liked reading a solid and serious take on sexual abuse by the clergy, even with incest thrown in for good measure Either like Angel and Pretty When She Cries oralong the lines of Trafficked The Diary of a Sex Slave and Boys For Sale Instead what I got was a long, long, booooring string of very unerotic porn geared to be the most shocking possible with som 1.5 actually and that only for the first half of the first chapter.This started out quite interesting, and I certainly would have liked reading a solid and serious take on sexual abuse by the clergy, even with incest thrown in for good measure Either like Angel and Pretty When She Cries oralong the lines of Trafficked The Diary of a Sex Slave and Boys For Sale Instead what I got was a long, long, booooring string of very unerotic porn geared to be the most shocking possible with some totally incredible mystery crime plot rife with facts stretching my suspension of disbelief well beyond final breaking point I found myself skimming only by the time I had reached 30 35%.I should have been warned upon reading the author himself stating the story was intended to push the envelope in a realistic way That attempt failed, considerably Instead the book reads like a contest of who can shock the most, exactly like your average 12 year old daring his friends to lick lamp post far down in winter Childish.Apropos childish, yes of course this was written so that you get the impression of seeing a far less than 18 years old teen having sex with and being raped by assorted adults, including his father, monks and a priest 14 or 15 might be the age the author actually aimed at Which, while this puts Diego below the AoC of 16 which is normal where I live still didn t shock me into hot frissons of debauchery It all was trying so hard as to be ridiculous and speaking wayof the hangups behind the work than anything else I have no idea where to begin with this review A blurb would just be confusing so I m covering things to be warned about BEWARE, THE FOLLOWING IS CONTAINED WITHIN Incest brothersIncest father sonSex with PriestsMurderSuicideDirty kinkRough languageThis doesn t border on incest or elude to incest, it s swimming in it The sexual content is frequent and some of the nastiest MM sex that most usually shy away from It will make most people uncomfortable if you are steeped in religion and woul I have no idea where to begin with this review A blurb would just be confusing so I m covering things to be warned about BEWARE, THE FOLLOWING IS CONTAINED WITHIN Incest brothersIncest father sonSex with PriestsMurderSuicideDirty kinkRough languageThis doesn t border on incest or elude to incest, it s swimming in it The sexual content is frequent and some of the nastiest MM sex that most usually shy away from It will make most people uncomfortable if you are steeped in religion and would consider sex on alters, sex with priests, etc to be sacrilege, you might should consider passing on this read. after reading blurb overviewafter seeing tagserotic, suspense, mystery, incest, priest abuse, brother brother incest, dad and son incest, father son incest, priest erotica, dom sub sex, dad son sexi don t care how good can this book be, i just simply won t read it A proposal for a journey to the catalyst to an awakening which will open a pathway that leads to secrets and eventually cause him to surrender toThe Ultimate Submission.Blurbs needs love too Tough love in this case Someone needs to cuddle it, kiss it tenderly, then give it urgent treatment. First of all this book is not going to be for everyone You know when your mother tells you not to touch something because its hot but you can t help but touch it, well this is one of these occasion.If I m honest when I first saw the Tags attached to the book I thought hey maybe I shouldn t go there but as I said I m the type of person who has to have a tiny peep in what s in that box I ve been told not to look in..and I m glad I did.Yes the story has everything in the tags it says but let m First of all this book is not going to be for everyone You know when your mother tells you not to touch something because its hot but you can t help but touch it, well this is one of these occasion.If I m honest when I first saw the Tags attached to the book I thought hey maybe I shouldn t go there but as I said I m the type of person who has to have a tiny peep in what s in that box I ve been told not to look in..and I m glad I did.Yes the story has everything in the tags it says but let me tell you there was also so much A storyThis is about a young man coming of age, and its very well written.Dark and erotic but full of mystery and suspenseAnd the ending..well lets say that blew me away Sometimes its always worth peeping into that box This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers To view it, click here One thing is certain this author loves a lot to f ck, he likes a little D s, but not at all BDSM Whenever a scene looks a little bit like BDSM, it is described as cruelty or torture.The main character, who is also the narrator, changes twice of identities in the course of the novel one might almost say three times At first we think that Diego is the narrator If this is the case, what he said was extracted from his diary by Gabriel Then Gabriel becomes the narrator, but under Diego s ident One thing is certain this author loves a lot to f ck, he likes a little D s, but not at all BDSM Whenever a scene looks a little bit like BDSM, it is described as cruelty or torture.The main character, who is also the narrator, changes twice of identities in the course of the novel one might almost say three times At first we think that Diego is the narrator If this is the case, what he said was extracted from his diary by Gabriel Then Gabriel becomes the narrator, but under Diego s identity.Diego and Gabriel are identical twins who have never met until they are 18 Diego Gabriel discovers twice he is not the son of who he thinks one might almost say three again At first, he thinks to be Miranda s and Brian Manning s son Then, the MC learns that he is the son of Justo, which he believed to be Gabriel s father Then Father Sebastian Raul let him believe that he is his true father Finally, Mrs Manning says he really is the son of Justo and his brother Matthew is too, that he believed hitherto to be Brian Manning s son General Manning is his adoptive father and doesn t know that Diego is not his son.At the beginning, we believe that the real Gabriel was murdered, only to discover that in fact, it s Diego who was killed We first suspect John Satapathy to be the killer then we think it s Father Sebastian Raul who killed him in a fit of madness To finally discover that it s Diego who is really dead and that is his brother Gabriel, who has taken his identity that of Diego , who killed his twin brother So, in summary, Diego is the dead boy and he was murdered by his twin brother Gabriel, who pretends to be him.So Diego initially believes that Matthew is his dizygotic not identical twin brother Then he believes he is not his brother because his father is not really Brian Manning Finally, Miranda Manning tells Diego Gabriel that he and Matthew are brothers since Matthew s father is also Justo.To complicate matters a little , at some point, Diego and or Gabriel doesn t believe that Miranda is his mother, but it was Justo s wife, who is dead in childbirth But is it really Justo s wife who gave birth to him Anyway, if you understand something, you are true genius I have read the entire book and I struggled to follow the thread at times I must say that my interest was not very consistent In the first half of the story, I was bored to death It was only sex scenes almost nested one inside the other Most of them were incestuous One was with a little dirty drug dealer Two were voyeurism A lot of masturbations, some in church A threesome A lot were with a priest or with friars As I don t give a f ck that priests and friars f ck or not, with each other or with students, as long as it is with consenting adults, I was bored enough to think to stop reading this book many times.Speaking of Jesus, Brother Blaise Abinav saysI hope that He was able to experience something just as fantastic during His brief life on this Earth I cannot believe that God would have denied Him at least one moment of carnal bliss Then things begin to get complicated Paranormal elements are inserted into the story We discover that, in the past, everyone deceived and betrayed everyone else, and therefore, everyone in the current story is not who he thought he is To put the icing on the cake, there was also this unhealthy relationship with Father Sebastian, who is a true psychopath and who tried to kill Gabriel Diego, for good this time, but decided why I don t know to commit suicide in front of everyone else.It s murky from beginning to end Wicked , as Diego and Gabriel put it.The author has good vocabulary I didn t meet often in this kind of book erotica words or expressions as fait accompli, sacrarium, mise en sc ne, jocular, expunge, infatuation, perfunctorily, susurration, escapade, epitome, rakishly, habitu s, besotted, Ayurvedic unguent, behove, mullioned, pre empt, assuage, unflappable, arugula, behest, quim The author does certainly not read only erotica But he invents words occasionally I noted a few Recaimer instead of reclainer , compellation instead of compilation , irremeable instead of irremediable.I also noticed a couple of bad spellings And instead of an , here instead of hear , in instead of it , quite instead of quiet a few times , cold instead of could , wonton instead of wanton , their instead of they re and so on.I give 2 stars to this story for the parts that have a little piqued my curiosity Father, forgive me for I have sinned and it s been a billion years since my last confession My sin I liked this book really, really liked it in spite of all the guilty blushing I endured during the reading of it Butbutoh, it was sosoedgy Daring Unapologetic Pushing the senses to the limit with concepts that we re told are bad immoral and yet done in such a way that we re helplessly drawn into the luscions vortex of sin right along with the characters.And when I say don Father, forgive me for I have sinned and it s been a billion years since my last confession My sin I liked this book really, really liked it in spite of all the guilty blushing I endured during the reading of it Butbutoh, it was sosoedgy Daring Unapologetic Pushing the senses to the limit with concepts that we re told are bad immoral and yet done in such a way that we re helplessly drawn into the luscions vortex of sin right along with the characters.And when I say done in such a way , I mean the events are portrayed through the MC s eyes and are so personal, so deeply intimate, that we do not see them as a reader with all our possible prejudices and hesitations We see them as the character And, somehow, some way, with the author s gift of honesty and depth, we or this reader anyway are able to see this tale of unthinkable sin, of one taboo after another as very possible And, for me, very delicious and wanton.I adore stories involving the Catholic church Always have And I ll admit stories about priests falling victim to their own lusts are particularly fascinating and arousing Maybe it s the black cassocks Maybe it s the temptation Whatever it is, I love it So I fell in love with The Ultimate Submission from the first scenes with young Diego and his infatuation for the enigmatic and ultimately dangerous Father Sebastian The mix of sensuality and grittiness in the prose Every touch of flesh, every description of body parts, scents, want so bad it hurts and thenreleasetitillated Andoh it felt so wrong, agaisnt everything every good girl and boy has been taughtbut yet I could noput the book down than I could hold Niagara Falls in a tea cup.One thing I found SO fascinating about this book was the varying ways that submission and domination affect different beings Some books tire me in their portrayal that, for some personalities, the sub dom relationship is a fix all for all that ails you Not this book In addressing the complexities of the need for domination, there was the most overwhelming, beautiful sense of urgency The beautiful character, Diego, who was only beginning to act on his desire for men, craved this domination He didn t know why, he only knew the search for it controlled him and he sought it in such agonizing, sensual desperation For me, that part of the story was what I loved best The urgency in that search for something so very, very deep in us that for some of us the only way to recognize it is through physical intimacy An addictive need, a wonderful narcotic in our blood that takes away all our inhibitions, all our morals The prose reminded me very much of one of my favorite books, The Carnivorous Lamb by Agustin Gomez Arcos The same lyrical, elegant, sun soaked on the terrace of a lovely villa dreaminess And the same uncompromising sensuality that makes you devour and forget your guilt and all you ve been taught Mr de Valera has a divine gift for describing people His characters are extremely vivid and the author manages to make even the least likely to be attractive character into unbearably alluring, living, breathing bodies you want to touch, to feel, just like Diego does So up close and personal, once can practically feel every inch of flesh, every fiber of clothing, every tiny detail.And the plot No disclosures from me, as usual But it DID have a scrumptuous twist Well, make that twists Well, I ve seen my confession hasn t helped Yes, I love the book I ll probably read it many timesIt was that delicious Holy Hell Fuck Me Forgive me bless me do something father for I have f ing sinned by all definitions reading this shit A brutally erotic suspenseful sort of thriller brimming w treachery, betrayal, abuse, lust, and ultimate absolution Somewhat fascinating if you re of a psych behavior studious persuasion But be forewarned..it s unapologetically unfiltered unromanticized masculinized erotic material and some will undoubtedly find the content offensive which includes but is not limitedHoly Hell Fuck Me Forgive me bless me do something father for I have f ing sinned by all definitions reading this shit A brutally erotic suspenseful sort of thriller brimming w treachery, betrayal, abuse, lust, and ultimate absolution Somewhat fascinating if you re of a psych behavior studious persuasion But be forewarned..it s unapologetically unfiltered unromanticized masculinized erotic material and some will undoubtedly find the content offensive which includes but is not limited to Brother brother incest, father son incest, violently abusive dub con sexual material, blackmail homophobic bullying, priest altar boy parishioner sexual relations, additional clergy fuckingsexual relations, questionable hygienic kink and practices, murder, suicide, I just know there sshit I m forgetting view spoiler hide spoiler Although the story is awash in primitive carnality..there is still this sort of lyrical introspection, life affirming growth, a spiritual evolution enveloping the content that makes a very seductive story Side Note I purchased this via2.99 It was once free online fiction, and it s a very generous lengthed story However, the published end product still contains numerous spelling typos common review complaint For me this doesn t didn t necessarily negatively impact the story, but I was quickly able to discern the correct words being communicated Understandably, others might not w potential negative implications My rating is for my appreciation enjoyment of the unique content and storyline..edits be damned I finished this at around 1 30 in the morning I was so tired and wrung out when I read the last sentence Tired and wrung out, not because my eyes hurt and I d been up since 6 the previous morning Well, a little bit of that, but what I was so messed up over wast the core of this story This is filled with incest between father and son, incest between brothers, hard core sex between priest and parishioner Sex that is really taboo, rough, and just plain wrong Instances where I thought the sex I finished this at around 1 30 in the morning I was so tired and wrung out when I read the last sentence Tired and wrung out, not because my eyes hurt and I d been up since 6 the previous morning Well, a little bit of that, but what I was so messed up over wast the core of this story This is filled with incest between father and son, incest between brothers, hard core sex between priest and parishioner Sex that is really taboo, rough, and just plain wrong Instances where I thought the sex was erotic even made me cringe later when the story progressed to a point where I could not believe what was going on This book is all these things But behind all of that, the core of this book is so muchYes, this is a coming of age story But even that is not enough The twists and turns in the story are so ugh, I don t even know how to explain what it is I don t have the words, even now hours later Just when I thought I was figuring something out, a clue was leading me to the solution to everything Diego goes through, answers to Diego s pain Just when that would happen, I d have the rug ripped right out from under me The story is told so well, I had no idea NO IDEA When it ended, I was in shock Still am.See, behind the depraved subject matter is a mystery The mystery sneaks up on you Captures you and does not let you go Diego s story is so messed up and I could not stop reading and I m 100% sure I ll be reading it again